Writing a song, need help :]?

Yeah, if some how this song get%26#039;s published

[which I highly doubt it will]

I%26#039;ll give you credit =]

But basically I wrote a poem and I want to turn it into a

song(If that makes sense?)

And it%26#039;s dedicated to this guy...

I basically just need help starting it out and some help

beginning the chorus =]

My poem goes like this:

%26quot;I hate the way you smile,

and the way it makes me feel.

I hate the way you dance and sing,

and the way it makes me squeal.

I hate the way you look and dress,

and the way you fix your hair.

I hate that you talk whenever you want,

and the fact that you don%26#039;t care.

But what I hate the most,

[and I don%26#039;t give a dam...]

Is the fact that I can%26#039;t hate you,

and never ever can.%26quot;

So if you could help thanks abunch =DD

xXx

DaniiDARE

Writing a song, need help :]?

That%26#039;s cute, I like it. For the beginning, how about something like: It%26#039;s like you%26#039;ve got a spell over me. I liked you, but I wanna get over you already. It%26#039;s so hard when all I do, is every waking moment think about you.

For the chorus, how about: I hate that I want you. I hate that I need you. I hate that I fall for you every time I see you. No matter how much I try to get over you, I secretly wish that you would like me too.

Hope this gives you some ideas!

Writing a song, need help :]?

it sounds a lot like the poem off of the movie 10 things i hate about you